The prompt was to write an intimate-feeling 20-word story involving the emotional effect of weather changing, as in the season moving from summer to Fall, and to include the word “leaf”.
Congrats to everyone who participated! Karen Walker's story is dazzling! I read the story first, and loved it. Then I read the title and found it even more amazing. The assonance of those "a" sounds beautifully echoes the emotions of the scene described in the story. What a piece! (Even the first four words are particularly evocative and hint at deeper layers of meaning.)
Congrats to everyone who participated! Karen Walker's story is dazzling! I read the story first, and loved it. Then I read the title and found it even more amazing. The assonance of those "a" sounds beautifully echoes the emotions of the scene described in the story. What a piece! (Even the first four words are particularly evocative and hint at deeper layers of meaning.)
Thank you very much!
Wonderful 😊
Thanks, Meg, and congratulations to everyone, especially Karen.
Thank you, Cheryl.